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Written by Bruce Whealton
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Monday, 02 March 2009 05:22 |
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Your feedback and suggestions for this poem are very much appreciated. It is an early draft and I hope to see what I can do with this. Comments are welcomed and appreciated. From your feedback and suggestions, hopefully my skills as a poet will grow. Ghosts and the Haunted House in the Woods There was a haunted house not far from where I grew up - about a mile of woods separated me from that place. It was set into the woods, set off from a rather quiet road and this hideaway location only added to the intrigue. My friends or my sister and I would walk through the woods at dusk, and watch eerie lights come on at dusk in the house - a house where nobody lived - we were quite certain of that. You could see the entire inside by looking in through the windows. It appeared empty, except for that something that we thought we were seeing, or the voices we thought we were hearing, at dusk or after dark. Bruce Whealton 2009
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Last Updated on Monday, 02 March 2009 05:27 |